I like the characters, they definitely look interesting. You have a good sense with reflective light, but I think the background is a bit lacking for appeal. As for the foreground, I also believe that the values could have been a lot more contrasted; there isn't much in terms of shadows. Take the girl's furthermost arm. It has the same value as the shadows as under her neck. It should be darker. Nonetheless, the scene is very dramatic and that's always a plus! Keep on trying and you'll only get better.
"Great use of perspective..."
I like your use of perspective on this one. Your work. You have a good colour sense. A down side, the main "asset" to the drawing looks a little... flat, to most eyes. Which is understandable, this is a very hard view to make look right.
Keep on trying though! Practice makes perfect.
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